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Knocking
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Knocking |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I hear his knock upon my door It makes me wish for so much more a page turned back, twas just a peek of what we were, and what I seek. His knock is light, then goes away to leave me hopeless one more day his hand could open heavens gate instead I sit in hell, and wait. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The give and take of this leaves one wanting more of less... waiting, that is... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, I understand your loneliness and your tears and I know that I have said it so much already but with a loving heart like yours you are destined to hear that knocking on your hearts door soon and your love will be standing there with flowers of dreams and a smile to always warm your heart! (sigh) My thoughts are with you as always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know how that feels.  on this poem.Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
his hand could open heavens gate instead I sit in hell, and wait. He makes me soooo mad, Sandra... I love the poem.  ~ hugs of waitingLyra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Perhaps a door of your own to knock on would ease the wait .... Don't knock it 'til you have tried it!  I can feel both the want of something past as well as anticipation for something new ... .. well done! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
At least you get a knock, I've got a lock on my door...well said, Sandra, you know I feel this. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
There has to be a follow up on this. Where once a lonely heart did dwell In this place called hell True love now lives All is well Enjoyed the poem... Paul |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Enjoy your work, cat, and was compelled to respond this time . . . Perhaps you'll listen evermore for his return through your door but it's the past you listen to and from this prison what to do? It may be best to seek parole and on the outside find new role if you've paid for crimes committed think ahead new life permitted |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like Krawdad's reply to you..turning a new leaf as it were, oil the hinges, slip in the magic key as Alice did and go on your way out of hell's predicament..nicely done |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
An echo from the past, will doubtless ne'er last. Wait for an unfamiliar rap and leave behind proven hurt's crap. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
He better knock soon or someone else will knock...no one should have to wait forever...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, yet another sad read. Inspired this response. I hear a knock; it’s different and a voice that calls my name The past that haunts my hearts escape is fighting to remain But something lights the passage as I run to meet my peace It lies not in my mind this time, dear God I’ve found release The flutter of excitement as the door does open free A smile of love before me on an angel I can see Heavens gate now open, to a future made for two In hell I sit no longer and at last my love is new Sincerely Rick Good luck and keep up the good writing. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think Rick and the others...have said it well.....How is the bat problem???? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dont wait for him to knock, knock on his door If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - sad write again, a happy one is due. Wishing you the best... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Don'tcha sit around in hell Look for someone else to RING YOUR BELL~  You bring us into your dimension easily gal~ Writing it soooooo well~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I know this dance... Must be a very special man...certainly a very lucky man. I know someone just like this. When I get impatient...I shoot him a raspberry. ThisDiamond |
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