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Open Poetry #21

Ups and Downs (pallandrone)

LWF31407
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 78

0 posted 2002-07-11 02:47 PM

Emotional Rollercoaster
Highs and Lows
Why must it be?
Providence Knows
strengthening process
Must Be Reason
Stand to with miniroty
avert Spiritual Treason
---non uniformity, freedom, thought, freedom, non umiformity----
Treason Spiritual Avert
Minority with to stand
Reason Must Be
Process Strengthening
Knows Prividence.
be it must. Why?
Lows and HIgh
Rollercoaster Cmotional

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-11 02:55 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is excellent, sweet friend, I am impressed, WOW!!! (sigh) Not only have you created a perfect palindrome but you have also stated a powerful point addressed that continues to speak powerfully throughout the course of it! (big hugggsssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, BRAVO!!!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

LWF31407
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 78

2 posted 2002-07-11 03:07 PM

Again, NOah! TY kindly! Lewis

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

3 posted 2002-07-12 07:58 AM

Brilliant, absolutly brilliant, I'm not even going to ask how you managed this; I love it, the fact that you've managed to make a meaningful poem out of it is outstanding ... Big pats on the back .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-07-12 11:51 AM

That is some good writing. Very true those words are.

Cold hands means a warm heart

LWF31407
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 78

5 posted 2002-07-12 12:28 PM

TY all very kindly for the kind word! Lewis

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