Open Poetry #21 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Suddenly my heart has just bottomed out tears stand on the edge of flood cushions sit on end free breath stops in hold suddenly my skin doesn’t fit me it seems a bit quite thin my mind doesn’t seem to know me and belongs to someone else [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-11-2002 11:19 AM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well written - evokes powerful images and thoughts - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady You always say what you think. Good write. ![]() |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Don't I know this quick rush!!! Enjoyed your ponder lady, as always... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This feeling is familiar, Helen.... but you put it into such beautiful words that I almost can't wait until it happens again... ![]() Lyra |
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turtlefreak1979 Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 20~turtle lane~ |
wonderful!! ~alisa~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nice write sweet one... |
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