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Edge Of Dawn
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Edge Of Dawn |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Edge Of Dawn She takes a little wishful thinking to the only light found Straight to the first star against that sky to be seen Drifting into eternity even if in her own mind She finds the sweetness that only exists in dreams... So unaware to the stare towards the worlds blanket overhead Time wrapped itself around the hours without end In matter of moments the whole world will know she's through praying It's anything but replaceable finding hope being natures friend... Alone again doing what she so knows best Hanging on for dear life to the edge of dawn without rest But, it gave way to places and faces out there She felt time give praise to her longing in night air... Time doesn't take back where she wants to be Running along fields God places in the distance ahead Freedom rings louder then the words from the mouth of the wise As she clings tenaciously before daybreak spreads... One can hang on when the miles lead you to kinder rivers Break free from a days plea there on the edge of dawn Just lingering in constant reminder of a much more powerful place Just where night's slipping into daylight coming along... Unreal to the self but clearly part of the heart at last She absorbed that moon and on it's much kinder path To where gold is still every bit harsh to the eyes But, soothing to the soul and thoughts held inside... There's nothing like breathing somewhere on the edge of dawn Where imagery of the wonderful is never gone Something in awesome just before the sun's about to rise For, it tends to cease a dreamers cry... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
There's nothing like breathing somewhere on the edge of dawn Where imagery of the wonderful is never gone Something in awesome just before the sun's about to rise For, it tends to cease a dreamers cry... ...... This is great work, my friend... I liked reading it... Regards, Sudhir |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Nice work. Deb  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful work Saunni! ~Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Saunni, There's nothing like breathing somewhere on the edge of dawn Where imagery of the wonderful is never gone Wonderful words, enjoyed. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is such a beautiful poem and the last 4 verses are just awesome - thanks - Paul |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
saunni~ this is so beautiful...your words always touch me so deep within...wonderful write! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Something in awesome just before the sun's about to rise This is my favorite time of day...its too bad that I usually sleep through it... but on the other end of the day, just before the sun sets...it looks pretty much the same with the shadows falling in the opposite direction......I usually catch that one, and hang on to it's beauty all night.... I love your writing, Saunni...  ~ hugs to a poetLyra |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I enjoy your work, it has a mystical feel here. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Saunni, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too get this ensation when the morning light bathes upon me from a dreaming and then I feel as though I have wings and I can embrace that sun! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, I just love your delightful words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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