Open Poetry #21 |
Spoken Soft and Tenderly |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Spoken Soft and Tenderly I was hurtin' for a long time until she came my way and said some magic words to me that took my breath away. Words that were soft and sincere. Words of acceptance and healing spoken loud and clear. These words of which I had waited so long to hear? The words "I Love You" now music to my ears. I know not why it was so easy for her to say these words that meant so much to me. That caught my attention. That warmed my heart. That set my spirit free. These lovely words of love from her sweet lips spoken soft and tenderly. JamesLee July11 2002 |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Tenderly written from a heart so deserving of that love. Great write. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
softly and tenderly... indeed... Regards to you, my friend, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, It don't get much better than that, enjoyed. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very nicely written poetry - amazing how powerful a few words can be like I love you - this really gives wonderful insight to that power - thanks - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am kind of going through a bittersweet experience right now where I love my Joanna so much and I wonder if she feels the same for me still because I want to make her the happiest girl she can be! (sigh) I wish this joy to always flourish in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Good poem Jamo...but stay away from those women....I've gotten gray hair since I first started foolin' with them females, (of course that was about 38 years ago?) |
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angeliceyes48198 Junior Member
since 2002-05-28
Posts 16Michigan,USA |
Well written! Love can be a beautiful thing! This is an enjoyable read! Angeliceyes48198 |
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