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BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2002-07-10 09:45 PM

Behind A Smiling Moonbeam
~*~
Drifting in echoes of honesty
somewhere between heaven and earth
I search among the smiling moonbeams
for a morsel of worth
remembering times of betrayal
tranquility soothes windswept thoughts
and solitude guides in knowing mirth
for behind the next moonbeam
I find your truthful eyes twinkling at me
tears vanish
as I am swept away
with you
behind a smiling moonbeam

BloomingRose

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2002-07-10 09:56 PM

beautiful!!! the pic too....helen

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-07-10 09:57 PM

YAY!!! Oh Debra, this is soooooo beautifully shining like Luna, sweet friend, I just love the moonlight you scatter in your gorgeous words, we all love you so much! You have such abeautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-07-10 10:02 PM

Debra darling girl this is exceptionally beautiful, your gift with words is a constant inspiration to a soul too long denied love’s light. Beautiful writing utterly utterly beautiful, I love it utterly.

The way you spin words into wonder is always perfect and sometimes on days when the day seems particularly drab you are a positive shower of light and magic. Wonderful writing. It flows beautifully across the page like a sweep of rainbow hue.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-07-10 10:24 PM

I love the pic. I love the poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2002-07-11 02:04 AM

Your worth is alot more than a mere morsel and testimonies to the gifts you have shared are all the proof I need on that. Beautiful thoughts you convey in your words and I loved each one of them.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

6 posted 2002-07-11 08:32 AM

Helen~ Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed.

Noah~ Your kind words always touch my heart. I thank you.

Marsha~ Thank you so much for your kind words. You my friend are an encourgement to me to continue my attempts at writing.

Loner~ Thank you very much!

Mark~ Of course you know you are always an inspiration to me. Thank you so much.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

7 posted 2002-07-11 09:03 AM

Outstanding write here! Awesome! And, I love the title

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2002-07-11 09:19 AM

beautiful poetry - stunning picture - winning combination - loved your poem - Paul

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