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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Could could I sit next to you uncover myself bare my soul without worry or rejection could you cover my faults could my words touch you could I draw you near could you dare to reach me could you listen to my heart a soul that is screaming in whispers of could gtky |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
what a powerful capturing of the needs of sharing and the risk thoughts that go with it - great poem - Paul |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
:thumbup: Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...can do...James |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I Always enjoy The way You say much With few right down the middle of the page Gloom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful Helen. If we could always have the answers wouldn't life be perfect? Enjoyed. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
could would should.... cool write ms slick dug it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helen, You'll get ever man on the site with this one excellent. |
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turtlefreak1979 Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 20~turtle lane~ |
very very nice, loved it!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOY YOUR READ  |
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