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A Voice in the Wind
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A Voice in the Wind |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada 
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 Wind Beneath My Wings midifile  A Voice In The Wind Eagles must spread their wings, And fly from childhood homes, The dreams they’ve known, The feelings that they’ve shown, I am the wind. I feel you flying by, And sometimes in my turbulence, I bow my head and cry, At your passing. What has been will oft return, The weather patterns rearrange, The phases of the moon. I will remain. Inside my heart. You are inside my heart. I cannot understand the way I feel. Why must one season start, At another’s ending To my dreams I will go. Run to the faces that I know Be with me this time in flight, I will not fall; please hear me, Call your name. My voice is as the wind. And I am out of sight. Sherry Gardner It is a conversation.... You figure out who is who.  Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this Sherry...very, very much... |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you very much Karilea. You must have been refreshing just as I posted... I usually don't get responses that fast... and my email notification almost deafenned me!!!LOL Big Smiles. Sherry |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Simply beautiful. Feels like morning and mourning..if that makes sense. I love the pic and this verse. Sincerely, Reg |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sherry, I enjoyed the blend of voices in the poem. Blending perfectly with the right effect on the reader...Nicely done, a beautiful poem... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....Absolutely beautiful... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I am the wind. I feel you flying by, And sometimes in my turbulence, I bow my head and cry, At your passing. Very beautiful, Sherry... I think that the conversaion is between the wind and a flying creature such as a bird...or between the wind and God... or the wind and that hot air balloon in your pic. Either way, I think that the wind is one of the conversationalists.  ~ hugs up up and awayLyra |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you, Regina, it makes perfect sense.... it is the plea of spirit. Nancy... glad you liked it. Barry, thank you for replying... glad you enjoyed this exchange. Dear Lyra, you are absolutley correct... it is a conversation with the wind.... or atleast a breath of in-spir-ation. Thank you all again for your comments. Appreciated.... Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (06-13-2002 12:27 AM).] |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
what a wonderful message within this beautiful poem ! mycafe |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
It's the wind, the eagle and the sky talking to themselves, I think (but then, I'm just not good at abstract stuff like you  !!Nicely written, Sherry. Luv U  Mom |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Sherry, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this seemed to me like a conversation between a young boy or young girl praying to God on his or her knees and finding solace through the wind! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, you always make me smile with your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sherry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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