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Summer Memory
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Summer Memory |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Summer Memory Memories flutter drifting there Inside the place of hide The touch of them Soft they waft Over the see of me The dreams of this Soft summer’s kiss I was younger then An age of diary page I wrote it all Days of summer’s sun When heart song was sung Entwined in the touch Of innocence and heat And still unbidden come The memories floating In the air of lost remember Like a cooling September Lost dreams roam On the page of Youth’s ardent hopes That summer fair how fair I flew on the swing chair And you standing Balancing with ease Charmed the warm of me Tagged me as your Summer love While the fair stayed My soul you played Ahhhh the dream Yes the dream And when autumn came You went too following In the van I can, yes in memory, Still can, feel the pain Of loves depart The hole in my heart Memories they flutter still Like butterflies trapped Inside where dreams still hide And You where are you? Lost in my summer of memory Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know this quite well. Very good poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Krissy Such wonderful images I saw as I read you beautiful words. I really liked this one very much. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Krissy, for you, I would share my teenage papers, the times when I wrote like this, so sweet, so full of hope for the tomorrows to come... I still have it, you know. All in my own handwriting, before computers were a common household word.... Yes, Krissy, I would share it with you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, Memories they flutter still Like butterflies trapped Inside where dreams still hide Wonderful words.  |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You've done it so captivatingly! Really enjoyed reading your work... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Krissy, this is wonderful. Your poem reads exactly like someone reliving their memories, very touching and with tender feelings. How you have grown!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
krissy, dear sis of my heart...your writing is just as beautiful and softly written as i remembered it...wonderful write! just lovely...*sighs* take care. amy  "you can't stop |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
captivating revelation of memories - thanks for the very well written poetry and for sharing your walk through memories with us - Paul |
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