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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Schema Recognize and embrace moments your feet call this ground home… Feel shifting walk of thoughts ride decisions floating… In soft bend grace curious comments of those framed attitudes… For the picture you adopt within you is not the one they see… |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
For the picture you adopt within you is not the one they see… Soleil...I really love the truth of this... I think its something we all do... and you wrote it brilliantly.  ~ hugs of hiding ourselvesLyra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms noir are you doing magic again slide of woman hand conjur of suggestion? enjoyed it lady |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Interesting, well-thought out write. I've heard it said that when there are two people in a room, there are six persons present...the way they see themselves...the way they perceive each other... and the actual person that each one is. Thanks for posting. Shenachie |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Soliel hi there Finally I get the chance to get on here and reply, it’s a nightmare, mum should be shot at dawn, but I don’t expect that I could get the court to convict her. I don’t think computercide is actually recognised as the crime it is.  This is a really wonderful piece of writing, the flow is exquisite your writing really is exceptional, and this flows like a dream. Beautiful and so well written, and oh do I know this feeling As always Krissy   And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil Deep and intriguing...the many sides of things....especially, lovely thought producing poetry! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Soleil...what Bridget said exactly. I could never have said it better. Well done. ~Hugs~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
deep and thought provoking - thanks for the great poetry - paul |
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