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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I fly moth wing mouthed on sigh high skies when you music me the euphony of yes words when we are kinship skin, candy unwraped in crave as luxieria benighted in un-illumination we are soot colors of pleasure muffle meld I speak bark songs, I am bulldog doured of hunger and glower our love weave with sin side tender when you agitate in your skin with excited ends I worship the didder of your tremble bendings my puffing gasps are brown sacks of laughter you run with them tiptoed in your fingers and lick their flavor as joke jelly melting you are flannel face silly with blush girl grin when you rub your grease on my shirt canvas and stain my mind with lubricated euphoria we are enjoy words in boxes filled contented deep I am binged with glut dreams of satiation and my 'want to' places are folded towels in sun I breathe the scent of memory smells in them and pray for rain to drench our willing again you are moth wing mouth smiles flying then ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-10-2002 05:44 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I speak bark songs-- elder Oaks sing song in braille-- fingertips read history as edges of present prevail. I cleave unto a life with root-- I speak bark songs--and sing them smooth. lovely little daydream you gave me there--um, how much do I owe ya? truly lovely ds...tsk..tskk..t'me..  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mmmm lazy good morning to you Dark. If smiles could fly, mine would be there already. way cool write this am, now if the rest of my body will just wake up...*wink* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I had to read this two times, and I'll do it again, maybe more than once again...but this is intense...awesome...a writing that could only come from you. I'm impressed....very! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serene one.. paid in full ms..the tsk tsk 's did it, thanks for your crazy smile Donna thanks babe, you will have a great day today...just saw some mist whisper people....they said she will smile with deep heart. passing shadows, you bless me with your comments and I do appreciate your reads |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I am binged with glut dreams of satiation and my 'want to' places are folded towels in sun I breathe the scent of memory smells in them and pray for rain to drench our willing again
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina.. no no no..not the nekid laundry lady thing..well ok, let be bring my gym socks and doggy blankets thanks babe for the hug by touch |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
brown sacks of laughter flannel face silly these two excerpts will have me smiling all this day, and into the eve of thought... as for the rest? eye smiles over all.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, You brew an exotic elixir In a secret mixer, enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, DS You are write word enthusiasm! Thanks for such good reading. Cool huh? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
elan...thanks ms E, always a treat to have your smiles Sy, thanks guy, much appreciation for the comments Ms martie, good morning and thanks to you...yes it is shivering 70 here this am (big grin) supposed to warm up later |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
fueled by her mouth sighs burrowed deep in surfeit's sleep he found he could fly Indigo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I fly moth wing mouthed on sigh high skies when you music me the euphony of yes words when we are kinship skin, candy unwraped in crave as luxieria benighted in un-illumination ============================= and glower our love weave with sin side tender when you agitate in your skin with excited ends ============================== when you rub your grease on my shirt canvas and stain my mind with lubricated euphoria we are enjoy words in boxes filled contented deep =========================== I breathe the scent of memory smells in them and pray for rain to drench our willing again you are moth wing mouth smiles flying then ============================= my oh my....my my my.... ya had me from the first line... me thinks this puts a whole new light on being a moth Not even a bug zapper could deny the pretty blue flames heat in this one. very very very cool write DS. signed.... mothwithsigheyes loland lol @ the replies on this... Reggie? is that laundry done yet Now for me some words come easy |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
This is a great poem. I don't like it from my personal belief, but it is an awesome poem anyways. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
MS Indigo, sleepy eye sighs are the sky for the wings of dreams thanks lady friend for the review and comments janet marie, (large grin) was wondering if the moth in wing would be a good meta' for a smile...seemed it would for you anyway (wink) Thanks for the read ms..a pleasure to have your visits. Kellie, there is not much more of a treasure to be had, than to have someone appreciate something that is not to their liking...thanks ms for your read and reply. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I loe these flittering fanciful thoughts you create, sweet friend, you truly are a butterfly of these pages who shines with kaleidoscope inspiration! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks my friend for the review |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
DS - what a wonderful poem to ponder - to experience - to read again and again - your word magic is awesome - thanks Paul |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
we are soot colors of pleasure muffle meld I speak bark songs, I am bulldog doured of hunger and glower our love weave with sin side tender when you agitate in your skin with excited ends ===================== I am binged with glut dreams of satiation and my 'want to' places are folded towels in sun I breathe the scent of memory smells in them and pray for rain to drench our willing again ===================== Though the entire piece is meld mind magnifique, the above two verse lend thought to a creation classic in it's nest of learning. Truely an superb penning from you and an excellent reason for me to explore more of your works. Saving this one in my library to savour and to gain some knowledge that I seek. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
goodknight sir, thanks my friend, so much appreciation to you Mark, humble thanks artful friend, am pleased from your review and that you found useful toolage for thought. |
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