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One More Time |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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The love, you say you have for me If only I could feel it one more time The love I feel, you would surely see But, for now, I just hold it all inside of me Hoping someday the love I feel will show And maybe, the past will be forgotten Then maybe, once again, our love will grow I long to be held in your arms, once again To feel your loving, and gentle touch To feel the love, I once felt from you This love from you, I miss so very much Even though, I can no longer show how I feel All of those feelings are still there inside me Just waiting to be able to give them to you Once things get back to the way they use to be By Sue 7-9-02 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I may be young but I know how it feels. very good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, That's what I like about you...the optomism! Nice write. Peace...and happiness.  Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you open yourself to us to see powerful emotions from within you in this well written poetry - Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Keep pushing, Sue.... If you think the feelings are there and locked inside of him, all you need to do is to find the key. excellent poetry.  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
"I can no longer show how I feel" Great Poem! Thank-you. |
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