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Nocturnal
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Nocturnal |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Green eyes catch mine as they gaze at my face in the glass Lean, muscled, defined Sleek body glides quietly past... Street all to ourselves It is time when the neighbourhood sleeps Day's cares have been shelved Still, the night creature quietly creeps... Stop! What is that he hears? Body tense as he takes hunter's stance Warrior devoid of all fears as the ancient drum signals his chance... Fast, fleet as the wind With a single leap corners his prey Victorious to a quick end So begins his one meal for the day... Dawn starts to ascend Shedding light on the spot where he's at In shadows we will soon meet again ...Nocturnal... We are poet and cat... Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s...know what you mean love the new picture... M |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thanks M, and now you see the real me. Appreciate your reply, too! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Really enjoyable and very well done, Sunny. Its interesting how poets tend to be night people...we also seem to have this strange tendancy to appreciate rainy and cloudy days.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I've been a night person all my life, but my cat is asleep during the wee morning hours. I guess we're both insomniacs.  Much enjoyed, Sunny, and nice to see you here.  *hugs* my friend!Michael |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good one, Sunny. I like lots. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, sometimes I am nocturnal too and I always feel my best writings come out at that depth of night! (kiss on cheek) This is a powerful treasure, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is really good...beautiful as the sweet face in the pic that wrote it.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny darling heart in this delight you have excelled your usual high standard normally your writing shines, in this one poem you have written incandescence. I cannot praise you too highly. This is exquisite writing I love it utterly utterly. Truly beautiful. And I know exactly what you mean, I am definitely a night owl. Wonderful picture you look amazingly happy, and it is excellent to see you. As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this poem.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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