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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-06-12 06:34 PM



Watch as the water flows
Through the hills and the meadows
Now through the craggy mountain creek
It comes to the peak
It falls down the sides
Well besides
It is a beautiful mountain waterfall
Who wouldn't want to see this most beauteous site.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2002-06-12 06:41 PM


Such a nice visual image....hearing the
roar of the falling waters,  the flow
over rocks into the waiting pool below..

Thank You..

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2 posted 2002-06-12 07:20 PM


who indeed.  the sound of waterfalls, the sight of waterfalls.  So peaceful.

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


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