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Tell Me Grandpa
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Tell Me Grandpa |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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 Tell me grandpa I want to know about your times so long ago when everything was so old and all about your life so bold like when you had to hunt for food skin the rabbits that grandma stewed Tell me grandpa I want to know about your times so long ago when you had to ride on horseback along the dusty winding track the miles you rode just to get to school in those days this was the rule all the children traveled this way most of the time in the heat of day Tell me grandpa I want to know about your times so long ago those days of old that are now past in your memory they last and last I want to hear them, my grandpa dear please share them with me, I want to hear about the olden days, you cherish dearly so then in my memory, I too see them clearly then I can sit and tell my kids all about what grandpa did Tell me grandpa I want to know about your times so long ago Image courtesy & copyright of Greg Olsen Gallery Love is the life of the soul... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tracie, this is a beautiful write. What we can learn from them is amazing. Great job hon.  Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
That is so true Gentle Spirit. I will always remember many times sitting on my Pa's knee and him telling me about different things that happened in his lifetime, moments I will never forget. Thanks for your lovely reply ~hugs~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks James ~hugs~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Nicely written! Enjoyed it! Neeraja |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I can't tell you how much this one touched me!!! and the lovely picture compliments this nicely!!! very well done girlie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I just find it so beautifully uplifting how our grandparents can share with us so much from their days while their children always show them whats new! (kiss on cheek) I can't wait to read the many lovely poems based on all he tells you, sweet friend, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you!  Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Neeraja~ I'm glad you enjoyed. devina~ I'm pleased this one touched you so, thanks for your most lovely reply sweetie. Noah~ You say the nicest things hon and I appreciate it very much....thanks. When I post the next one about my grandpa I'll be sure to post it just for you  ~hugs~ to you all Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Tracie ... this one touches me a great deal. How I loved to sit with my own grandfather, and hear his wonderful tales. I only wish I'd written more down when I had the opportunity. This is a wonderful reminder to all, to listen while we can. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's neat to go to a retirement home or a other care facility for elderly people...and listen to the stories...and the wisdom that these folks have to give to us young people...if we'd only listen Liked this one, reminds me of when I went on trips like that. Maybe it's time for another visit... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Kit I'm so pleased it touched you so. Both my grandfathers passed away when I was very young but still old enough to remember the stories....thanks for your lovely reply. passing shadows~ You are so right, I used to work on and off in a nursing home and the stories were amazing, it was just wonderful. thanks for your wonderful comments. ~hugs~ to you both Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
History of family and of the world is always better straight from the source rather than a book. This was a very sweet piece and your repetitive lines made it a sure joy to read and I am glad I didn't miss it. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Tracie dear, you've share something so heartwarming and lovely Keep counting your blessings |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I use to love my grandfather telling me all about how he came to America and all the inventions that were firsts for him...he use to also peel an apple in one piece, then give me the skin...while he ate the apple...I could never do that no matter how hard I tried...funny the little things you remember about those who have passed on. hugs M |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Beautiful poem. My dad lived in those days, when they walked or rode a horse to school. I love this one. Nan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Mark~ Yes you are so right, I could listen for hours thanks for your warm reply.mycafe~ I'm so pleased that you liked this and appreciate your reply. M~ Yes those memories are for keeps and cherished, you story about the apple is so sweet...thanks for your comments. ~hugs~ to all Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . this brought back a lot. . . wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This has the lovely resemblance of the Judd's song... and just as much a treasure in word as it is in music... thank you! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie, I love it when history is handed down in stories and songs and you seem to be carrying on a tradition in fine style here Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks Sven, Lady In White and Kethry for your wonderful comments to this poem, apprecation is immense. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is a wonderful read. Such memories it brings listening to stories told. I had to go back for a second read. Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ You stir some beautiful memories in this heart~ Thank you dearest lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Eloise~ I'm so pleased that this one touched you so and that you read a couple of times, makes me happy to know that ~hugs~ Margie girl~ It makes my heart happy to know that this one had that effect on you, I'm happy to have done so, thanks for stopping by ~hugs~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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