Twilight Skies (Terzanelle)

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-07-09 06:24 AM

Twilight Skies

I walk beneath the twilight skies
filled with hues of blue and red.
I hear nature sing her cries.

This night the ground will be my bed
as I dream underneath a moonlit sky
filled with hues of blue and red.

I sit there dazed in a natural high
and I take in her grande majestic view
as I dream underneath a moonlit sky.

My thoughts once again drift off to you
nature has taken me under her spell
and I take in her grande majestic view.

Oh what stories mother nature does tell
I listen to her whisper in the breeze,
Nature has taken me under her spell.

All is calm, peace prevails with ease
I walk beneath the twilight skies.
I listen to her whisper in the breeze,
I hear nature sing her cries.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-09-2002 06:27 AM).]

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

1 posted 2002-07-09 06:47 AM

Such beautiful words. You have been blessed with a great gift.
Never stop sharing your words with others Gentle Spirit, your words have such meaning
it's hard to describe.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2002-07-09 06:58 AM

*sigh*
Oh this is so beautiful Gentle Spirit, I enjoyed this very much, well done on this delightful poem.
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2002-07-09 08:12 AM

beautiful worded images , quite dreamy in fact
Hope

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-07-09 11:23 AM

This is just beautiful.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-07-09 11:27 AM

Gentle Spirit
Well done and not easy to do, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-07-09 11:39 AM

Absolutely beautiful Donna!
Very very well done!
~Hugs~

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

7 posted 2002-07-09 01:56 PM

Great images... beautifully written!

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

8 posted 2002-07-09 02:15 PM

I love your format here Donna!!! Each line woven with the next and repeated--perfect view from my end!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-07-09 02:20 PM

Beautiful, Donna. I like this form combined with your words.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-07-09 05:36 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love how you experiment with so many various forms of poetry and this is indeed a breathtaking natural terzanelle! (kiss on cheek) May natures voices always throb your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much, I LOVE IT!!!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-07-09 06:04 PM

enjoy

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

12 posted 2002-07-10 05:51 PM

I like this form, and you have created beauty with it.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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