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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I was a book when I dreamed now I see the pages blank behind I was just a few short stories of david and a lady there taking a bath on a room at night pretending she didn't know anyone was looking she asked for five stones for her fish tank and wore my sling leather round her belly when she danced said no one believes in giants since the dodgers have the pitching and did I want to stay over since her husband wouldn't be home at least that way for the rest of his life I felt sorry for him too goliath or not, his sword was plastic with batteries and my gang banged sniper noise that made him smaller, still he seemed taller to me then something about being king is not all it was said to be the plasma is nice and the tunes seem fine but time is still rude and talks out of turn usually too loud to ignore and really just a book, is all I ever wanted to be ©Dark |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You are a book..leather bound and embossed.. Priceless. I love this expression of you. Sincerely, Reg |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Your symbols do a dance macabre But do a very good job. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina thanks babe....that makes me feel special leather bound? mmmmmm what are you wearing? (grin) not the black outfit with the whip? Sy, thanks sir..just was doing some psalms compares to modern "days of our lives" scripting...kinda (smile here) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-09-2002 07:39 AM).] |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
...and really just a book, is all I ever wanted to be... the imagery and metaphor makes me want to see into the gray... good morning, Sir... an interesting way to start the day... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ink of blood written on onioned skin...helen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very interesting concept, Dark. Enjoyed this on my otherwise gray morning. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Elan thanks so much for your review of this mushin in gum wrappers ms slick, thanks lady with hat and smile, for your read and touch Enchantress, thanks babe, a spot of joe to light you some dawn colors? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "something about being king is not all it was said to be the plasma is nice and the tunes seem fine but time is still rude and talks out of turn usually too loud to ignore and really just a book," Your imagination goes to incredible places, some of them hit hurt. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie..thanks hon, was not a bad thing just me getting my self talked to by self...hell I will forget what self said pretty soon anyway..(wink) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I could feel a tinge of sadness in these words, sweet friend, sometimes it never benefits trying to get someones attention so we'd rather be read like an open book resembling some kind of autobiography! (big hugggssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Love the expression.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling heart this is Fabulous writing utterly utterly fabulous, never do you fail to supply my eyes with food for thought. Wonderful writing and I love it, the flow as smooth as silk excellent writing absolutely excellent. I’m left mouth agape and the images and the way you write it is incredible. Utterly utterly perfect. Well done my friend   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks my friend loner friend, thanks for your read and reply ms marsha, you are so sweet with your pink ink and utterly you give me treasures with your touches |
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