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I Have a Body |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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It pays to write under midnight oil leave your bed and let juices toil work up a sweat to reduce those abs weave that carpet of words, press tabs with goals in mind after how many times must reduce that waist and look streamlined the mind does exercise..innervates the hand now must make a stand for new shape demands. have always carried a little pot no reference intended to cooking alot now the presence of that fills me with disgust I prime my brain for strategies of exercise musts. has to be done, I've made it public sit too much on my rear end and buckets it takes three times a week twenty minute periods a new figure... I seek to draw serious sketches Will you do it too or feign the flu? [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-09-2002 04:07 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I not only have eyes, I have a body too!This one didn't catch any attention so far...what other body part I can work on..hehe |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I liked this poem. Maybe you should do your next one on legs or something.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Feels good sometimes to laugh at myself...and it takes more calories then just sitting. Enjoyed this! |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Martin hi there Thank goodness mum had Paul’s computer she could fall back on, I don’t know how she would have managed without it, or for that matter how I would have managed, if she could be trusted I’d lend her mine but she can’t she is death to anything that has circuits and electronics. Maybe now she will treat it a little better when it returns to her desk but who knows with mum. Wonderful writing I’m so glad I got the opportunity to reply to you, you are one of my favourite writers and I always enjoy your writing, and this is exceptional, I can’t understand why it has so few replies. The thoughts this conjure are amazing, wonderful writing As always Krissy   And while thy willing soul transpiers at every pore with instant fires Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Krissy (07-10-2002 07:17 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Why Martie, I think a good laugh works away at fatty tissue...you stress less and eat less..there you go. To be honest it all comes from the heart, hope you're having a good summer in spite of the heat  Krissy your Mom has passion down so well in her poems..I am amazed at the eloquence of her passages that results..and she's modest about it. Just keep writing as I do..I know for a fact I have changed styles over the years. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Loner_23 legs or something coming up then  why leave out a part like that! |
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