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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-07-09 02:47 AM


Truly

If I should be so bold to speak
words of love to one so sweet.
Should I than not follow through
for if not I would have lied to you.

With all the love in my heart
my words shall travel to you
To touch you softly.
To be tried and true.

For truly I am in love with you
and I will never do anything
to willingly hurt you.

JamesLee
July08
2002


© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2002-07-09 04:50 AM



JamesMichael-
This is a 'truly' lovely piece.
I very much enjoyed reading this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

tracie66
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2 posted 2002-07-09 06:51 AM


James Michael~
Beautifully penned, sweet

~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-07-09 06:19 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, any woman would be ever so lucky to find a love as loving and compassionate and true as you! (sigh) May you and your love forever share a lifetime of joy together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marsha
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4 posted 2002-07-09 06:23 PM


James darling boy how utterly utterly perfect is this, words warm  and delightful flow over my soul from your pen. How beautifully you write, how clear the images of love are. This is very special your writing is always a cut above this is especially tender. I can only say this is perfect, truly beautiful writing and you are incredible.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-07-09 06:24 PM


Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2002-07-09 06:25 PM


This is pretty. How could anyone turn this away? No one could.

Nan

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-07-09 08:20 PM


This is truly beautiful James....
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-01-27 11:48 PM


I appreciate the wonderful responses...truly...James
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