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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Dee-lightful Rose Petal by petal ... that is the way to love the rose Anything less is just admiring what she shows Unselfish is the bud standing high on her stem Adding beauty and elegance so proper and prim Enhale the vigor of fragrance born of morning song As depth of soul is revealed between right and wrong Vivid is the whisper reflected in the heart of day's sun Resting against her layers of love ... waiting to be won Rigid are the emotions sheltered three petals deep Shadowed in leaf of protection ... silently they weep Hollow turmoil perfumed with her sweetness for all Radiating elation to beckonings of friendships call Sweet is her nectar swirling amidst warming breeze Enticing the eclipse of eagle in a desire to please Tender is the sway captured in whispering wind Holding her blossom for the proper heart to tend Mark Christopher For Dee and the many many MANY thanks I owe her for not only keeping my poetry alive in my absence, but for truely being a dear friend across the oceans and always taking the time to make so many others smile even when she couldn't manage one for herself. These words cannot touch the REAL beauty of this remarkable woman nor would I ever pretend that anything I could pen would, but it is an expression of true admiration and respect for someone that has a heart as big as the country she lives in. Many hugs and much love in friendship to you Dee and big smiles to see that life is finally giving you back what you put into it. My 6000th is all yours as you earned it as much as I did. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Recognize love for the gift it is and not a need that is out of focus. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (07-09-2002 02:43 AM).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Standing ovation for you both. ever deep...runs |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This is such a wonderful tribute to a very special (I bet so!) lady, Mark. Very DEElightful read and happy 6000th !!! *all smiles* ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
absolutely beautiful Mark, and congratulations on your 6000!! I am sure that it will give Dee a smile, your caring shows much in this lovely write.  Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. {on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-09-2002 07:03 AM).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh WOW!!! This is truly a most beautiful and delightful dedication, well penned Mark. Well done on your 6000th post an excellent achievement  ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations on your 6000th post Cowboy. You've been riding the range far too long...time to take those boots off and stay awhile. Coffee's on, and the early morning Sunrise bids you stay on a bit, y'hear? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Congratulations, Mark! This is a beautiful verse, she must be extra special. I know you are. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
congs on your 6000th post  enjoyed |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
A wonderful way to celebrate your 6000th post! Simply put, this is a most delightful read! Deb |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 6000TH!!!!! The thoughts here are beautiful, but even more is the reason behind the thoughts...such a wonderful way to thank a good friend!  Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-09-2002 10:59 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Congratulations on your 6000 post, Mark... This is a beautiful tribute and a lovely poem. Perfectly written.  ~ flowery hugs of congratulationsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark Congs and I enjoyed the read. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Enhale the vigor of fragrance born of morning song As depth of soul is revealed between right and wrong Vivid is the whisper reflected in the heart of day's sun Resting against her layers of love ... waiting to be won ===================================== Sweet is her nectar swirling amidst warming breeze Enticing the eclipse of eagle in a desire to please Tender is the sway captured in whispering wind Holding her blossom for the proper heart to tend =============================== Beautiful verses for a beautiful poetess..... Well congrats cowboy...yer on your way again...better get to posting..you gots lots of replies to catch up with the moth  (dont say it) warden who? rofl And I'm not surprised you made your milestone post be a gift for someone else And I know you wont mind if I add my thanks to Dee as well...many a time when I clicked on Todays Topics..she had my name up top in the archives too.... Thank you Dee-girlie..for the faithful reads and support of my poetry...you always encouraged others and replied even though you rarely posted your own work. We miss ya but know your'e on the right track. Come back when you can and pick up your flowers. heart-hugs girlie and thanks to MC for just being you.   Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much ... Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch. J.Browne [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (07-09-2002 11:45 AM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This piece reflects a view..very rare to me. How you revere a feminine spirit is priceless. This shows a tenderness that is very..manly..if that makes a hoot of sense. Happy 6000 and I know Dee will save this forever. Sincerely, Reg |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- Good to see you, Cowboy. This is an absolutely gorgeous piece and I'm sure that Dee will cherish it. Congrats on reaching 6000! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Enjoyed this very much, Mark. And Congrats on 6000! I’ll go to puppy class…if Tracey will go to cooking class |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic tribute to a wonderful lady! A beautiful write for your 6000th post! Congratulations, and keep on writing! ~Hugs, Smiles & Cheers~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A most glorious poem, Mark. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Petal by petal ... that is the way to love the rose" and that is the way I have learned to read your poetry! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This has got to be one of the sweetest tributes Mark!!! I love it!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Dare I say Dee-lightful! Well done!Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oh Mark, where do I start? This is just beautiful and I love it. I will be printing it out when I get back online for myself. At the moment I am sitting in an internet cafe and they are looking at me rather oddly cause of the stupid grin on my face. Your poetry was worth every trip I made into the archives. I should be thanking you too for your friendship and the attention you paid to my poetry. Much love to you my friend. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments and the congrats. I appreciate them each and every one. Dee-No thanks needed. I always enjoyed your poetry and only wish you posted MORE. ( yes, not very subtle but hey ... TAKE THE HINT already when you come back.) I am glad that you enjoyed this one and no matter how much I want to ... mere words could never completely do you justice. Just keep being you and the world will catch on to just how special you are. Thank you again sweet friend and now go enjoy your new life and count on at least this cowboy eagerly awaiting your return on a more permanent basis. Love back to you my friend and rose of the archives.Recognize love for the gift it is and not a need that is out of focus. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just back for another read...and to see what's new  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Petal by petal ... that is the way to love the rose Anything less is just admiring what she shows Unselfish is the bud standing high on her stem Adding beauty and elegance so proper and prim Enhale the vigor of fragrance born of morning song As depth of soul is revealed between right and wrong Vivid is the whisper reflected in the heart of day's sun' Hey baby...this a beautiful write for a sweet person...and the writer ain't too bad either... ...the thought behind this reminds me all over again of everything I love about you! and you, needless to say, nailed the rhyme and cadence as usual...I LOVES YA!! k    I've been down this road forever, |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Mark Hi there This is an excellent write from you. Congratulations on 6,000 As always Krissy  And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sunshine - Not much .... how about with you? Thanks for the second glance. Kris - Do ya know just how many smiles you make me want to give you? Gawd, I do hope I can live that long. LOL Thanks sweetie, you are the reason that I love and the love that I reason. "B.S.A.H.A.O.Y.C.B." Krissy - Thank you much. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
It took me a day to think of an answer just for you but here it is, Mark. Love, Dee This small rose, without your sunshine, would wither and fade to nothing. Though I'm often in the shadows I revel in the warmth you bring. Your words give me the hope I need when all in my life seems too dark. You can change my whole perspective, for this I thank you, Mark. Oh nearly forgot to say I love the pic. It is nice to finally see what you look like my friend. Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater [This message has been edited by Dee (07-11-2002 12:10 AM).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Mark, this is a Bee-utifully pleasant buzz for your friend. *s |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Great tribute, Mark, and congrats on the 6000!  Great pic, too! (but who is that scratching your ears?) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dee- Heck, I am just glad you liked it. I worried, fretted, and then almost went into a panic because I know I didn't even touch on the beauty of the real you. Anytime I can add a little light to your day, just ask and consider this cowboy on a mission to do just that. Thank you once again for YOU and for always blossoming without any thorns. BTW ... there is nothing wrong with your perspective and the only thing that needs to change is for the world to take the time to get to know YOU and not see only the surface which in my book is a 10 anyway. Hugs and love to you dear one just for not running when you saw the pic. ROFL chansondegeste-Thank you and she is definitely a nectar worth buzzing about. Balladeer- You brought me roses???????!!!! Oh man, I can't wait to see what Toerag does with that one, but hey, you were "sweet" in doing so. ROFL. Thank you much for it all and the laughs. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (07-11-2002 03:03 AM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderful poetry - very thoughtful and image filled tribute - congrats on the posts - Paul |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Paul-Thank you for those kind words. I sincerely appreciate them. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Mark... This is so sweet. I know Mum loves it, she told me so! Congratulations on your 6000th, and if it's not boasting too much, I don't think you could have chosen a better topic!! :P Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bec-It's not boasting at all and I don't think I could have either. Nice to see you here and I am elated that she thought enough of it to share it with you. Thank you much and don't let her stray too far away. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Mark... No, I'm keeping a close rein on her... *lol* I talk to her regularly, she's doing fine. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*BRAVO* Mark....you know how I would love this right...and what a way to celebrate your 6000 milestone. thread to my library ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oooops forgot to make a thread. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bec-Thank you for the come back visit and the info. BTW ... Tell the woman to WRITE!!! Geeezzzz ... she can be so shy at times. LOL Charisma- I am glad you loved it and you know of course that the BRAVO will work anytime. Thank you for you sweet poetess of golden ink. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is powerful and endearing and so very meaningful. Again I applaud you~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
6 beautiful ones...regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful phrasing throughout Mark ... you've captured the essence of your friendship in such a tender and caring fashion ... truly lovely my friend! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Mark, A beautiful write for a wonderful person. Her poetry is definently missed here. Parker |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mark, firstly, I want2take this moment2congratulate you on 6000+ smiles and HugsOfHeart that you have brought2all of us here, and secondly, I applaud you on this splendid write PoetFriend... SmilesNhugs2u *~coco~* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
BluesSerenade-Thank you for those kind words and the applause. I appreciate them and you much. Sudhir-Thank you kind sir. Much appreciated. Kit-As long as she knows how special she is to me and the rest of us here then I am happy and I am glad you enjoyed it. It is always a treat and pleasure to see you here. Sit and share a cup of coffee with me anytime. Thanks sweet poetess of challenges. You are highly treasured. Parker-As is yours sir. Thank you much. Coco-6,000 hugs coming your way for always being there to lend your support and smiles. I sincerely appreciate you. Thank you. |
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