Carried Away With You - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #21

Carried Away With You

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-08 10:02 PM

The sun begins to rise
Across this wide brown land
By late afternoon you'll find me
Walking slowly along the sand

I'll stay and watch the sun
As it melts across the sea
In this paradise ever changing
There's no other place I'd rather be

We'll immerse ourselves in the water
In this sea of sapphire blue
Our love moving with the tide
As I'm carried away with you

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-08 10:06 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever be a castaway in the warmth and afterglow of pure romance forever, sweet friend, this carried me away with a smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2002-07-08 10:12 PM

This is a lovely poem. I really like it.

powerofthysword
Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA

3 posted 2002-07-08 10:14 PM

This is a very well written and expressive
piece, I wish someone would write me a poem
this beautiful. Your signature is very
romantic.

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2002-07-09 04:01 AM

What a beautiful expression of love, peace, contentment. Wonderfully written - you painted a lovely scene in my mind's eye. Well done.

~Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-07-09 12:18 PM

I love the feel of the movement in this, Sue...You've captured the rhythm of the tides.

~ tidal hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.