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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
I've journeyed to the depths of reason captured quandries in their lairs But I dismiss my own loud footfalls on descending spiral stairs Ancient spirits haunt with mystery unredeemed by what's not said Those silent lives betwixt truth and lies despite the books I've read Will we ever truely understand? Will we ever truely see? Or will the past circle round at last completing destiny? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this a lot. You get a  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This has that "dark" chanting feel that I do enjoy so much...neat ending too. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is sooooooo powerfully haunting, sweet friend, it too scares me sometimes yet I believe something in the past can be salvaged and can help set answers for the future! (sigh) This is powerfully said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The poem actually has the FEEL of descending spiral stairs.... Very very good, Bags... I like it a lot.  ~ spiral hugsLyra |
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