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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533
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I live near the airport, I heard your flight like fluid it started a stream with a swoosh it washed o'er my apartmented soul a lake of awaken'd dreams In your absence Love crawled (not a reptile but child) but it swelled as a sea your descent was a welcoming rain to a flowering heart would you know what all of this meant? Now a soft melody in a minor key but profundis where music was void to a suffering sailor alone in life's sea tis a ditty and hope is kept buoyed "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Now a soft melody in a minor key but profundis where music was void Really like your poem...especially this verse. New sig in construction. Please maintain speed limit. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've seen the afterwake of a large plane and the imagery you have left here brought back many fluid memories... excellence in writing.... that's you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Sir! ...Good Morning to you too! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fluid write, very smooth. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I love the "swoosh" this poem gave me! Neeraja |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Life is indeed an airplane terminal where so many things come and go from our lives, but one love will always come and never depart! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richard, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richard Great writing...perfect ending "tis a ditty and hope is kept buoyed" |
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