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Tender Certain
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Tender Certain In the mirror of today a thin veil whispers separation for I saw her in my eyes her curve of hip turned inspiration ‘til I was bloused and breasted light with her younger woman's delight From the corner of my glowing behind the flowing silk of day she turned like sunshine in my haze no need for words just wave of knowing she knew my heartbeat felt her gaze Though this was only sway of curtain it laced my fabric tender certain [This message has been edited by Martie (07-07-2002 01:27 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Certain tender... smiling here... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Martie, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too am amazed how the simplest most slight sights can feel like something so very valuable! (ksis on cheek) This is a very beautiful feeling, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I believe that you just got chosen the "Bride" of the day. Pretty special honor that this day would give to you, but then again knowing your heart and how you always rejoice in the beauty that surrounds you everyday, I can understand why you were captured by that breeze. Wonderful verse and I can just see the image of you in the reflections. Loved it and of course your beautiful heart. Big hugs. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh this one is a real beauty, Martie... I would say that it really has a certain tenderness about it... ~ hugs of certainLyra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the mirror of today a thin veil whispers separation for I saw her in my eyes her curve of hip turned inspiration 'til I was bloused and breasted light with her younger woman's delight From the corner of my glowing behind the flowing silk of day she turned like sunshine in my haze no need for words just wave of knowing she knew my heartbeat felt her gaze Though this was only sway of curtain it laced my fabric tender certain ============================= YEPPERS the whole poem....wasnt no way I was gonna seperate any of those lines from one another...they were the perfect poetic marriage of rhyme and turn of phrase... this was sheer delight read aloud..and as always your personification and imagery is as impressive as the view thru your eyes. I love this poem!! and the poet   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tis a certain keeper...Uh huh, Yep it is... Love the imagery of this poem.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This makes me smile. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, You did it again, a keeper. |
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Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
This Poem is great I love every part about it, keep posting |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, you do some fine lace with such a few spins of the needle lovely work babe |
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