Open Poetry #21 |
A Night's Tears |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
In what sounds of known silence is where life can be heard Crickets tuning rains prayer as bullfrogs bellow air ... this, nature sets to word In what sounds of loud violence thunder storms evening skies Shadows pass, formed in clouds visions of lightning shrouds ... patience, for the night cries In what sounds of coming rain this silence flows in song Each note driven by thirst amongst hidden cloudburst... time short, the want so long In what sounds of passions pain all that is missing is you The music of my heart that brings each sound to art ... in this night's tears of blue create an addiction .... share a smile!! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I have known these tears, and I am loving this poem. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Tears of Blue, mingled with the sounds that fill the night. Yes, I understand this one perfectly......wonderfully written! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
In what sounds of passions pain all that is missing is you The music of my heart'' you have the touch of gold....love this somewhat sad song, but beautifully done.... HUGSSSSSSS Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very nice write, Sir...very nice! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Craig, this is soooooo beautifully sad, sweet friend, I know these tears so well because while I'm happy knowing Joanna and loving her so very much, I also get scared I may lose her and I can't let that happen! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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