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In Shiver
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In Shiver |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Chilled before the finger tips that drift forever shores In waterfalls, to course the spine in rushed rain pours Where last these thoughts take flight to seek the sky And break away the heart-ached castings that indemnify Electrically, converging in the channels and the waves In rapids pulse the sleekest crests that each heart braves When in condensed revision found the echo of the great And pounding hard within the veins in sheer anticipate In shiver, all the molecules and pieces rise to blend And silver comes the climax of a want that will not end Where after glow becomes the moon at midnight high And glistening perfume to trace this staircase to the sky Copyright Kkh 07/06/02 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Softly sensual in all of it's shivering parts.... Nicely done Kathy.... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
First, thanks for commenting on my work, naturally, I had to read something written by one with such discriminating taste. Second, I'm awfully glad I did. Loved it! ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 **sighing** I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you bring such enchantment to these pages always! (kiss on cheek) This shivers with such passion, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Where after glow becomes the moon at midnight high And glistening perfume to trace this staircase to the sky A beautiful, mystical feel to this one, Kathleen.  ~ glowing hugsLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Kathleen...so softly sensual...lovely. ~Hugs~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you everyone. Appreciate your encouragements and inspiration. ThisDiamond |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is the first I have had the pleasure of reading of yours but you can bet I will be back to read more. This was outstanding to say the least. Your rhyme was divine and the cadence superb and of course the images your spill out are a special treat to these eyes as I am a sucker for vivid imagery in a poem. Awesome write. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ThisDiamond- This is absolutely gorgeous! I truly enjoyed reading this wonderful piece. Excellent! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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