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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-07-06 02:13 AM

When words will not satisfy
the need of you
why speak?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-07-06 02:21 AM

dunno...I've just always been very vocally expressive! er...with or without speech!

Truly tho, this is simple but NOT. The economy of words coupled with the message rendered a very sage-like poem. The title is PERFECT too.

love it, dunc...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-07-06 03:49 AM

of course..
Silly boy
just listen to each other breath instead

loved this

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-07-06 08:15 AM

You are indeed my brother in poetry...

well said.

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

4 posted 2002-07-06 10:36 AM

Duncan--

Well expressed--the mute of longing. In your case--the muse of longing.

Shenachie

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2002-07-06 10:57 AM

Everything is possible in the game of life
(Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-07-06 12:26 PM

What the serene one said...and didn't say...
Duncan...talk about impressive....

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-07-06 12:50 PM

Yep, if you can't have the whole bowl of
potatoes....why add the butter? ....

Said very well...perfect title...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2002-07-06 02:16 PM

*smiling at you*

You just took "distill" to new heights, as only you could.

For Dunc & Trace

I want to live in the realm of the senses
You've got to know how
And for some kinds of pleasure there are no defenses
I know that now
Our love is a crackling ladder of lightning
Our love is a fire
Our love is a wave moving deep in an ocean
Of need and desire
Waiting for you
I have no problem with this crooked world
I play the cards I drew
No problem with the changes life has hurled
My problem is you
Waiting here for you

I need your wonder and I need your light
I need your tender touch to heal the night
I need you laughing and I need you free
And I need to lock you away deep inside of me
Waiting for you

excerpt from "My Problem Is You"
Jackson Browne (of course)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-07-06 02:32 PM

ssshhhh!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

10 posted 2002-07-06 11:37 PM

Speaking is highly overrated anyway!

~ hugs of silence

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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