Open Poetry #21 |
Give To Me Your Love |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Satisfy my thirst Give to me your love on tap Take me once more to heaven And use my body as a map Whisper to me sweet nothings Ignite my inner flame In the passionate heat of desire I'll be calling out your name Smother me in warm soft kisses Envelop my body with yours At the end of love's performance I'll be demanding an encore Surrender to me your feelings Let your passion run wild and free Allow love to take over proceedings As you immerse yourself in me I am in motion |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl you are a healer of the night, OH MY This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder. I should have known when I saw your name on this that it would be incredible and it is utterly utterly first class I love it utterly utterly love it. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
lightly sensual write of love I love it. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always share true love with your love forever and ever and may he give you all your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) This is another gem to your love library, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Makes me think of Liam. *sighs* Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of the song "Gimme Some Loving". James |
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