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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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queen of sleep, please feed my eyes more than just this expiring of day more than sable vested owl light give me the fore day morn instead that rosy fingered morn, the incense breathing morn water me drunken from the day spring of morrow pulled in reign to present clock stop hour.... where daughter of dawn dances with open eyelids wide that have never known the dark nor the close eye of day or the empress of silence that is queen of sleep, that have never paled the child of evening leading her mother night... queen of sleep, please feed my eyes not of the gloaming tide or the evening vesper but give me the right to light of heedlesshap, let fickle chance wear the bedizenment of bright with mantle of joseph colors purposefully haphazard the guise glove me with dawn day fingers let me wear a chesterfield of chintz and yellow ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-12-2002 12:00 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh my!! DS...this shines! [This message has been edited by Martie (06-12-2002 10:46 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger When you ask, you really ask. Pull all the stops. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks babe, you are so gracious to my work. sy, thanks friend, had to try something new.. ms sunshine, you glow well, looks good on you, thanks hon |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
New looks good on you! Cor |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Fantastic write! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Woah... I loved this write, Dark my dear. I had to read it twice ... and then slowly... just to catch the literal way you have with tangling tongues. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cor, thanks lady...warm sun hugs to your day Enchantress, thanks lil friend, you are a treasure to me MagicSherry, Thanks for your eyes...so much appreciated you are |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
My what a gentle giant. Warm and inviting..like a summer shower.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina shhh don't tell anyone am a tree with wide branch steps girl climb places thanks babe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is an enchantment! Reads like a spell being cast, and I'm completely helpless. This insomniac truly appreciated this one. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serene 1, you are helpless, drat my luck was going to ask you for help too.. darn, fooey, shucks... totally helpless? thanks babe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
queen of sleep, please feed my eyes not of the gloaming tide or the evening vesper but give me the right to light of heedlesshap, let fickle chance wear the bedizenment of bright with mantle of joseph colors purposefully haphazard the guise glove me with dawn day fingers let me wear a chesterfield of chintz and yellow ================================ my oh my...could this be anymore lovely.. DS..this is pure poetry in motion...superb employ of imagery, vocab and phrasing to create this ethereal beauty. What also makes this so attractive is the subtle rhyme and flow of it...most of all its originality...you have created some impressively fresh images and thoughts in this.I read a lot of poetry and youve used quite a few words and images new or rarely seen in the world of "over use" and cliche that is a part of poetry. (particularly my poetry)  Wonderful writing poet sir...this new hat looks good on you  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
but but..ms janetmarie..I hurt my brain bumps wit it.... thanks hon,..it was fun to play with the images here. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh.....but DS .... it hurts so goooood ... the gain twas worth the pain me thinks... You know what they say about tortured arteeeests |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
jm...yesss but need first aid am afraid.. thank you cutsy.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, may you always rest on a pillow of heather and jasmine and forever dream the sweetest dreams with love by your side! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ds, every time I read something wonderful I know your name is attached to it, but this is just .....I don't have words for it....... it just leaves me *breathless* I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I keep reading it and it keeps talking to me at lots of levels - like peeling the onion - thanks it is great |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah, yo uare a tribute to moderators sir..thanks so much GS, you are a special gift in your replies, thanks to you so much GoodKnight, thanks for the review and comments, is a pleasure to have your eyes visit |
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