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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I know, the path is, again again, and yet, still beyond where being has deigned I must go I may not come back lost, lost by the fountain where Time flows the ducks, gathering pieces of Time like so many cosmic crackers, speak to me in the language of the heart and mind (quack quack) again, and yet, for the first time where sun and moon shine as one I may never know Destiny found, found, she knew me all too well knew that I would never be hers but that Darkness would come to me that, to balance Light, my Light Darkness would have to join with me so I would know it in me (speak speak) again, and yet, never ending the beginning now coming around as full circle I may never know Life held, held, by the hands of an Eternity that I'm only beginning to know an Eternity that waits to be both teacher and student in dimensions never knowing that its been here before seeing the planes of being (see see) --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Profound dialogue, enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
again,my friend,you have done it  liked it  |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Sven, Enjoyed this post very much. Much food for thought here - Time, Destiny, Eternity, Light and Darkness - and we are all these (the teacher/student who cannot remember being here before). Of course, it helps to take a slightly different look at reality than most of us have been taught we 'must' adhere to or be 'lost' (as in not being "saved"). So glad there are other's out there with real minds who think real thoughts, and have the need to express them. Thank you!!! ss Create something infinite today - Smile!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This says so much . Brilliantly done, John. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you have your own style and I enjoy seeing you use it. hugss M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Powerful words my friend. Very powerful words... Thank You... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
============================================= again, and yet, never ending the beginning now coming around as full circle I may never know Life held, held, by the hands of an Eternity that I'm only beginning to know an Eternity that waits to be both teacher and student in dimensions never knowing that its been here before seeing the planes of being (see see) ============================================= Loved it, love your style my friend. This is great. ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
We carry our own Sun and Moon yet clouds do pass through laden with rain. Enjoyed |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed reading this Sven! Neeraja |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've touched upon passion here, and drown it in John... I just adore this!!! and your format just adds it all up!!! Take care sweets!!! ~me Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sven, you been studying something, haven't you? This reminds me of some piece one would find in a college literature class. Excellent indeed!  |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You've so creatively penned a wonderful poem, Sven! *mycafe* Keep counting your blessings |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sven, You have become very diverse in your writing. This is an interesting format. Enjoyed Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends. . . sorry to be so late in my reply to you all. . . but, I've been away. . . it would seem that my mind and my pen have been thinking in tandem these days. . . and this, as well as other things, will be what they show for it. . . and passing shadows. . . the only thing that I'm studying is life. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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