Open Poetry #21 |
The In-Betweens (Inspired by Marsha AGAIN) |
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Between the dawn and daylight, between twilight and dusk, between the falling raindrops, between belief and trust~ All the joys of living lie in the in-betweens, where all the stars are shining, and there the angels sing. Speak to me of maybe, of nevermore, and soon. Dream with me of oceans and the rising of the moon. Let’s walk in sunny gardens, pick yellow tulips, dance with fairies on the border between certainty and chance. Nan |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Always share with us your inspire... very nice! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks, decaflame. I've got to quit reading her poems, they make me write! Nan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pilgrimage A delight to read. Enjoyed |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks, Seymour. I appreciate it. Nan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent! Enjoyed so very much! ~Hugs~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nan darling heart wherever you get your inspiration from and I think you give me too much credit, don’t stop. This is utterly utterly perfect I love it. Your writing is always an inspiration, the fact that you can always conjure up words of wonder and put them into such a perfect form is a bonus. Is this a wonderful poem YOU know I love it, and don’t ever stop reading me if it inspires such jewels of light as this. Wonderful fabulous writing As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the eathquake wind and fire Oh [This message has been edited by Marsha (07-05-2002 12:50 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A gem this is...and such a wonderful thought. Surely inspired, yes you are... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Enchantress, You are so very kind. Thank you. Marsha, girl, I've got to stop reading your poetry. I was supposed to do all sorts of things, but instead I wrote this. I blame you entirely. Magnus, Thank you so much. Marsha does this to me every time. I'm going to go cold turkey. Well...Maybe I'll taper off. Nan |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, I think I need to send you a whole slew of her unposted poems if this is the outcome. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this was so nice to read, the form and rhyme and the message..just wonderful! Hugs M |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Lynn, honestly, I had things to do. But when I let myself read her poetry, then I get caught up in it, and there I go. She should probably have to have a license to post, you know. M, Thank you so very much. I worked on the structure, and didn't get it perfect, but I thought it was fairly close, and it said what I wanted to say. Nan |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love reading your poetry, Nan... Marsha is a great inspiration...but we all inspire each other...thats one of the purposes of a website such as this one... You did a terrific job. ~ hugs from the heart Lyra |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That's true, Lyra. I read poems that have stuff I would never have thought of. And the way some of these people post! One fantastic poem right after another, I sit here with my mouth open in awe! Nan |
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