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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
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0 posted 2002-07-05 02:33 AM


07/05/2002
True Love

(Woman)
Tonight I lay inside you arms
I listen to the song that beats from your heart
Remembering the aftermath of our love making that
Melted me to you body connected me to you soul
Looking our I see the stars I count
My blessings on the same glowing star lord protect him
My knight and shinning love.
(Man)
Falling a sleep warm & secure
This woman is my goddess heaven sent to me
She’s so beautiful when she sleeps, cuddle her
Close to me I remember saying to her you
Free to fly come sore with me she took my hand with trust and love
Lord let her know she’s everything to me my angel of love the
Ground under my feet.
(Woman)
Walking slowly I go sit in the living room sitting
By the fire, flicking flames dance on the wall
A tear runs down my face happiness & peace have
Finally  come my way he wont make me cry
Clock is ticking away the hours of my forgotten pain
My forgotten sorrow.
(Man)
Deeply those blue eyes send a tremble through my body
Hearing the sound of your laughter brightens
The mood in my spirit, when you cry I’ll wrap my body
Around you & comfort you, and be there to lean on,
And have to hold, and protect? I smile at you cause you’re the
Only one who understands.

(Woman)
I wrote you this to tell you a secret that I’ve kept for you
Along time, when we first met I right then and there feel in love
With your loveable personality your true speak able mind
And those rock hard muscles that brought me to a melting sensation
The feel of your hot sweet body pressed to mine every time gives me
Pleasure and the satisfaction I believe in.

(man)
At your side I lay a single red rose to declare
My love I’ll never leave you without a fight to get you back
Tomorrow will come & you’ll take my breath away like
You do everyday when I’m with you, when I ask you to
Marry me I’m hoping that you’ll say yes to us to start
Our feature make a family have a happy life as
We do now.
©Ang "02"

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

© Copyright 2002 Care - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-07-05 04:39 AM


turned out pretty good...always proof read what you're posting though for typos before you post it. It makes it easier to read. Nice subject matter. I personally don't believe in love, but who knows?
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2002-07-05 06:03 PM


I think we all search for true love..this is a lovely tale of love found.
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-07-05 07:31 PM


enjoyed your words of loving...
*s
M

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