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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
rose petals s t r e w n along the hallway guiding me to a tub of scented bliss where you await to kiss and whisper "baby let me bathe a weary day away" (ah...confession here, this is my after-work fantasy, having someone to carry me to the tub & gimme a relaxing massage bath!!) Keep counting your blessings [This message has been edited by mycafe (07-05-2002 02:28 AM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I did that for someone once. come to find out, she didn't like it at all. I think I need to find someone who appreciates stuff like that. Nice write!! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I wouldn't say no to treatment like that. Love the way you did the 'strewn'. Nan |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
nice form *sigh* I love this! I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
mycafe, Wow...really well done.  Show you care to those you love...today. [This message has been edited by Larry C (07-05-2002 02:22 AM).] |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Krishankins ~ really?? I can't imagine anyone rejecting such a romantic gesture from a charming soul like you Nan ~ I'd like to invited to such a soak too. Thanks for dropping by. *hugs* Temptress & Larry ~ thank you so much for your kind words. Keep counting your blessings |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
romantic...who could refuse the gesture..keep up the writes  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'll be right over.....Tell me what you prefer and I'll bring a bottle of that too.. Oh! You were thinking of someone else.... Well, I'll have to go back to my own fantasy but damn it's lonely there! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
romantic, I think so! a vivid poem; I could almost smell the roses. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marie, dug the humour in this...and dreams do come true, you know....we can always hope.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Now your going to be jealous, Marie...because my husband has actually done this for me.....except for the rose petals, Which...by the way are really well strewn.  ~ relaxing hugsLyra |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Dear frens, thank you for dropping by with your lovely words. Here's a *BIG HUG* to you. p.s. Aww Lyra, now you've done it!! I'm really JEALOUS ya know??!!!  ~ mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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