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Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-07-04 08:47 PM

Wishing On Stars ... Dreaming On Rainbows
Gentle Spirit & Marge Tindal

Held within the silence of the night
dreams are born under moonlights' glow
Hopes are wished upon distant star
Just one wish, could you please bestow?

Let me dance on Rainbow colors
across the Milky Way tonight
Awakening to a dream come true
on early morn of light~

Twirl me upon the winds of tomorrow
carry my dreams to distant galaxy
As I drift on eternity's moonbeams
allow my dreams to become reality~

Set me down in joyous surround
in the land where visions have no end
Let me know that I have found
peace in serenity's glen~

Upon a star I'm forever wishing
thoughts carried on celestial streams
Eternal dance 'cross kaleidoscopic hues
in search of rainbow's arc of dreams~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-07-04 09:02 PM

Well..I am absolutely speechless and have goosebumps.
You two have managed to pen the most beautiful duet I can remember!!
How wonderfully your stanzas flowed into one another...
creating the perfect duet.
Thank you for this fantastic addition to my library!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Marsha

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Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-07-04 09:06 PM

Margie girl, and GS how utterly utterly perfect is this, you know my penchant for rainbows you know that I love them utterly, and this is a beautiful rainbowed hued delight. The colours sparkling within this and gracing the page as only a beautiful penning of your two souls would.

Truly exquisite writing from both of you a beautiful rainbow dance or divine delight. I love it love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly love it

YOU do know I LOVE this don’t you? I didn’t want to be too subtle about it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

mycafe
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3 posted 2002-07-04 09:09 PM

So breathtakingly beautiful...

~mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Martie

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4 posted 2002-07-04 09:18 PM

You two just made magic together.

ethome
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5 posted 2002-07-04 09:47 PM

Wonderful write marge!
This line is just too much!!

Twirl me upon the winds of tomorrow"

As Janet would say....way cool!

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-07-04 10:13 PM

This is so beautiful. And, the poem is perfect.

Trillium

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7 posted 2002-07-04 10:22 PM

Marge: Lovely and with an ethereal quality that is pure magic!

Betty Lou Hebert

Larry C

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8 posted 2002-07-04 11:59 PM

Donna & Marge,
I absolutely love this wonderful duet. I could use all the hope you have to offer. But I didn't know serenity had a glen. How long have you been holding out on us? Huh?

I want more, please.

Show you care to those you love...today.

Joyce Johnson

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Washington State

9 posted 2002-07-05 12:32 PM

I don't know how you do it, but so glad you do. Joyce

Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2002-07-05 04:01 AM

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T   M A G N I F I C E N T L Y
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My regards,
Sudhir

Neeraja
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The Netherlands

11 posted 2002-07-05 04:46 AM

I enjoyed this poem so so much!!! And the presentation is so beautiful!!!

Impressive!!!

Neeraja

ellie LeJeune
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12 posted 2002-07-05 06:21 AM

I love the gentle Spirit and the hope and promise this wondrous poem enfolds...Beautiful, Marge!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-07-05 09:06 AM

Very lovely poem, you write well together.
Sandra

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2002-07-05 09:10 AM

Thanks to all of you.

I remember one day when I was
feeling very low having made
a comment to Marge, and in reply
she said that it sounded like
a beautiful title for a poem.
A short while later I told her
I believed she was correct
and that I knew it would be even
better if it had the magic of her
words in it. I was so right!!
Had she not wrote it with me,
it would never have come to be.

Marge gal, thank you,
not only for the pleasure
of writing with you,
for you making this so
very beautiful, but for brightening
my life with a smile that day....
and many days..
For that......I thank you.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-05-2002 09:13 AM).]

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2002-07-05 09:16 AM

Thanks everyone ....
I'm glad my little 'Co-Quill came in here to take a bow~
This little piece was a *gift* from her Gentle-Persuasion to pen it with her~

Donna ... I thank you for your beautiful thoughts~

Sudhir~
WONDERFUL !
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

16 posted 2002-07-05 09:08 PM

what a wonderfully poetic team.....

lovely as always Marge. I've missed you.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

Balladeer

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17 posted 2002-07-05 09:28 PM

a well-deserved rainbow for each of you..

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2002-07-05 11:27 PM

Annie thank you so much.  This was great to do.

Deer, and may we all find that pot of gold at the end of those rainbows.  Hugs.

Thanks again to all.  Peace to poetry land.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

19 posted 2002-07-06 04:19 PM

AWhisper'sCaress~
AND I've missed you too, my friend~
Welcome HOME~

Balladeer~
Awwwwwwwww, you just 'knew' we'd love those, didn't ya'?

GentleSpirit~
This really was an experience for me ... and I thank you for your patience as I sorted out some happenings in the 'outside' world~
You're a lovely lady with lovely poetic thoughts~
Thanks for sharing~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Gentle Spirit
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20 posted 2002-07-06 08:44 PM

Again, thanks and peace to poetry land.

Marge, I hope those outside world things all pass swiftly and you heal soon. It was surely an experience that I will cherish
as is the gift of support you always offer. Hugs to you precious lady.
~D~

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan

21 posted 2002-07-06 08:58 PM

You two make a terrific team...
thank you for the lovely show.

~ rainbows of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

22 posted 2002-07-07 01:03 AM

Wonderful indeed, I'll be looking forward to another from your pens.

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller

CocoBaci
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23 posted 2002-07-07 01:10 AM

Upon a star I'm forever wishing
thoughts carried on celestial streams
Eternal dance 'cross kaleidoscopic hues
in search of rainbow's arc of dreams

Marge sweetie, awesome poem...
I especially adore the closing verse...
Hugs2uDearFriend
*~coco~*

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

24 posted 2002-07-07 03:04 PM

The two of you make a perfect poetic duet and I hope all the dreams for both of you come true, but please, when you are done with the stars and rainbows, could you put them back up for us.

Gentle Spirit
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25 posted 2002-07-08 06:30 AM

Lyra, thank you hon. It is good to see you back.
Special hugs to you.

Eagle One thank you.  It was a pleasure writing with Marge.

Coco, thanks.  In the last verse we both took a part
of the title and incorporated it into the verse.  Thanks.

Mark, the stars and rainbows are there for all to share.
Feel free to wish upon them any time friend.

Hugs and peace to all.  Again, thank you so much.
~D~

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Kethry
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Victoria Australia

26 posted 2002-07-08 08:51 AM

Marge and Donna, fabulous collaboration
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Gentle Spirit
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27 posted 2002-07-09 09:07 AM

Kethry, thank you. It was a wonderful experience. I enjoy writing with others so much and letting their words take me there....
Marge definately took me there with this write! Thanks to all, peace.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

suthern

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28 posted 2002-07-11 11:54 AM

This beauty has been gracing my email for a while... and has been greatly enjoyed while I struggled with an insistent werk monster. *S* But now I get to reply here... and find I have no words to do the two of you justice. *S* It's simply wonderful. *S*

Goodknight
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29 posted 2002-07-11 12:22 PM

just wonderful lovely poetry written by 2 wonderful talents - wow - I loved it so much - do more do more - Paul

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

30 posted 2002-07-11 07:21 PM

Thanks so much everyone~
I'm a little 'under the weather' right now ... but please know that I read and appreciate each reply~

GentleSpirit ... you're a sweetheart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Gentle Spirit
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31 posted 2002-07-11 09:35 PM

Again, adding my thanks to Marges. You are all wonderful. Thank you all for the kind words you have left for our little "duet"

Marge, heres hoping that you feel well again soon. Hugs hon.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

cpalmer
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32 posted 2002-07-16 10:09 AM

All I can say is WOW!!! This is fantastic!
Kudos to both of you!
Hugs
Cindi

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

33 posted 2002-07-16 05:05 PM

ah this is sooooooo beautiful, a treat to read, and a thread to my library.....love it!!!!!

(((Hugs)))
Charisma

Gentle Spirit
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34 posted 2002-07-16 07:26 PM

Cindi, Charisma, thank you both very much. I know how much your visit pleases both Marge and myself. Thank you for leaving such lovely thoughts, and hugs to you both.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

BloomingRose
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35 posted 2002-07-16 07:40 PM

Marge, This is just superb! I am always astounded how you can create such beauty with freshness.
Together, you and Gentle have a masterpiece!
Wonderful!

Deb

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (07-16-2002 07:42 PM).]

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

36 posted 2002-07-16 08:56 PM

Again I am so grateful to each of you for your wonderful response to this 'co-quill' ... Gentle is the Spirit that moved me and I'm so glad she did~

Donna~
Thanks gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Gentle Spirit
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37 posted 2002-07-20 08:41 PM

Deb, I thank you for the lovely comment.

Margie gal,

thank you for the honor and pleasure. Hope you are feeling better sweetie.

Again, thanks to all and peace to poetry land.

~D~

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Marge Tindal

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38 posted 2006-04-23 11:12 AM

Just 'cause~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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