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This Silent Song
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This Silent Song |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Read Me… Read me in a softened stance Deem me Fragility of chance Read me in crest of wind upon a breath in selfless sin Deem me animation of your dreams in fairytale of love so keen Read me in a line of sorrow a happy smile of fate a crisp winter morning before it is too late Deem me your enchantress on peaceful silent wing keeper of your heartthrob This silent song I sing… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Tanya, I love this poem. It is so subtle. Innocent even. I don't mean to ruin your rep. But it is!!  Love 2 ya girl, Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
I so loved the emotions in here... You wrote so well, devina! ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Tanya, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous wods you write, this is very sincerely heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey. . . just like always. . . I'm listening. . . beautiful hon. . . just beautiful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Kris...Ooohh- tell me you didn't (dramatic sigh here) say the "I" word? I am ruined!!!??? LOL You know? Now I shall have to write a real devious one...  Love ya sweets!!!marie- I am so glad you enjoyed this...was a pnoder that I just had to get down (been doin that a lot lately)...ty lady!!! Noah- thanks for peekin into a thought you!!! John- and I know you just love this side I expose lately!!! thank you for the ear sweets... vandana- thank you Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
I enjoyed this softer side of you... as always you still keep your poetry edge!!! |
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