Open Poetry #21 |
Light and Tea |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Light and Tea June 29, 2002 Have a cup of tea, Gazing at the reflection of my ring- My own design, and adoration, Now become a symbol in my life. Now does the diamond take the rose place, or does it enchant the air? Now my love would have a remembrance of me... The ring... which bright like my smile Will glow on his face When he needs light. Eliza Simmons |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice thoughts.......He will have light from that.... Happy love to both of you. Don't think it ever takes the rose's place entirely. Very enjoyable! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Will glow on his face when he needs light." James |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
hehe... I think to him the remembrance would be one poem I written it for him printed with our banquet and picnic pictures on the top of the page. LOL. The ring is just a fantasy. I didn't buy him a ring. Eliza Simmons |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ Ahhhhh, the beauty of poetry is when you can write the ring .... and have us see it as though it was there~ Wonderful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Eliza, this is very beautifully written! ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words and know this sure will bring a smile of light to his face! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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