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Open Poetry #21

My Universe For You

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-07-04 11:35 AM

I want to melt into your arms
In such fury that my heart
Flies of into a new universe

Where passion boils in eruptions of ecstasy
Sending flowering petals snowing
On tantalizing beds of aromatic pleasures

Where a diamond sky sparkles
In the rainbow pattern of your love
In the rustling of intertwining feelings

The needed moisture baths us in rejuvenation
Absorbing us in such a heat of interaction
That the vintage of perfection
Bonds us into rapture

Sending time back to do it again
And again ….
Until so exhausted
My mind escapes you momentary
To catch a breath of reality

Realizing you will be the death of me
Looking for anyone else
For the perfection I cuddle in here
Is worth a return trip

To all the fantasies
In all the worlds
Of all the universes of all time
In the intoxication of all the heavens
You can have me

Email me if at [email protected]
D.Lester Young (07/04/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=5012

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-06-2002 09:26 PM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2002-07-05 01:05 AM

Umm..WOW?
Argh....
Can't find the words to say how much I loved this..
Hows about a bump?

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-07-06 03:12 AM

ENTICING POEM OVER HERE, PEOPLE!

How another bump for another read.
hope someone else will enjoy it as much as I did.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2002-07-06 03:14 AM

(gets up off lazy ass) hmm what do we have here? talk about COMMITMENT!! Jeez louise! You guys must have a very special bond, you and this someone.Very special indeed.

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

4 posted 2002-07-06 01:58 PM

very intense and also beautiful

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