Open Poetry #21 |
A Victim Of Your Love |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I'm diving so very recklessly Into your sensual sea Waves of love and desire Are lapping all around me I'm sailing with you on the ocean You and I are the only crew As the sun sinks below the horizon I find that I'm anchored in you I'm losing all of my senses For your love has claimed my soul To be lost in your love forever Would surely be my ultimate goal I'm falling under your spell For I'm a victim of your love We were meant to be together For we fit like hand in glove I'm savouring each hour we are together Can we freeze this moment in time Our hearts are beating in unison Feelings of tenderness so divine I'm swimming with you under the moonlight Illuminated by a galaxy of stars We'll reach the peak of our passion As we sail towards heaven past Mars Your love draws me in like a magnet So engrossed in one another we are You are the wind beneath my wings My guiding light, my shining star Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, I liked it indeed. Nice job again. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lots of beautiful expressions of tenderness in this piece Sue.....Superb romantic write! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Be forever in Love Sue, enjoyed the read. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, A delicious read, Enjoyed the taste. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may you always sail beyond Venus and Mars into galaxies of endless happy dreams come true, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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