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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-04 12:14 PM



Ageless

time is
ageless
as wind grips
the land
turning
solid rock
into grains
of sand
but as much
as you try
you will
soon discover
you cannot
ever change
another


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
TwoHeartsOnePen
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 60
state of determination
1 posted 2002-07-04 12:35 PM


exactly
I love it

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

Temptress
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2 posted 2002-07-05 12:27 PM


Bump..

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Duncan
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Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-07-05 12:31 PM


but as much
as you try
you will
soon discover
you cannot
ever change
another

I musta missed that day!


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Joyce Johnson
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since 2001-03-10
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Washington State
4 posted 2002-07-05 12:33 PM


Truly and succintly said.  Joyce
Magnus
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5 posted 2002-07-05 01:15 PM


Only we can change ourselves....and being
able to do so in a positive way requires
wisdom, honesty, courage and often some humility along the way....

Thanx Slick...

Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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6 posted 2002-07-07 11:57 PM


How true this is! I love the erosion part. I can't believe I missed this one!
bumping it so others can see what I've missed!!!

Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
7 posted 2002-07-07 11:58 PM


Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

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