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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-07-03 09:23 PM

I find it hard to stop a ponder-
even when I welcome dream,
ensembles of poetic thought-
trickle through the scene…

Chaos reigns inside my head-
~a battle to be won~
Hard at work, my disconcert,
manages victory by sun…

Infantile, in necessity-
I cannot find the time,
To relish in my forte-
of slumber spell design…

Candles lit around the room-
Accordance to my feat,
Sandalwood, so soothing-
Yet still I stroke defeat…

Harmonious, oh blessed be!
I lull into a trance-
To cradle drowsy obsession-
~Another wasted chance~

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-03 09:30 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Tanya, I understand how hard it must be to deal with obsessions, sweet friend, this is very well-expressed and I hope you fnd some joy to help overshadow this yearning! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

2 posted 2002-07-03 09:59 PM

Hi Dev,
Loved the piece
Thank you
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-07-04 12:06 PM

Hey, Nice work T. You can just skip the "editor" part and publish.

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

4 posted 2002-07-04 12:36 PM

This makes me think of my lack of motivation to write down a lot of the good stuff in my head lately. Enjoyed your writing.

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

BrandeeM
Junior Member

since 2002-05-01

Posts 45

5 posted 2002-07-04 03:39 PM

May you find your time to close your eyes purdy poetess...

I enjoyed this!!!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2002-07-04 04:17 PM

Very nice mood setting and the scene though simple is deeply motivated..... A very good write!

TriXter
Member

since 2002-03-20

Posts 112
The One

7 posted 2002-07-04 04:19 PM

I enjoyed this poem

The man of few words...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-07-04 05:03 PM

Like this devina...James

ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

9 posted 2002-07-08 02:17 PM

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

10 posted 2002-07-08 03:16 PM

great work on this one.

i stay up late too, even when i don't want to. but it's never a poetic train runnin through my head. i'm glad ya wrote this one down. it's a beaut!

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

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