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Minus the calories
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Minus the calories |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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The real stuff she could not realistically nor figuratively afford so to satisfy her craving she just sweetened artificially. Snacking and supping to her delight she really outdid herself, but soon found out that zero calories was never able to fill her need. She dieted upon decision. Strictly. No treats whatsoever. She failed miserably, her cravings overcame her. Young and tan (in a muscle shirt) in full athletic view (on a bike) looked notably perplexed when her gaze made him feel like warm apple pie dripping with ice cream. Searching for a middle ground she mustered up a healthy serving of restraint, and to make it more palatable, sprinkled it liberally with imagination. She now smiles with whetted lips but walks the other way sweetly satisfied, minus the calories. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he this is so good I really enjoyed it! Minus the calories! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
her gaze made him feel like warm apple pie dripping with ice cream. Oh, wowsers. *G* This one needs a heat index attached! LOL I love it... and the ending is simply fantastic! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Young and tan (in a muscle shirt) in full athletic view (on a bike) looked notably perplexed when her gaze made him feel like warm apple pie dripping with ice cream. ------------------------------ OH YEAH! Like it could get any warmer.. it's already in the 90's! Excellent write with tanfastic imagery  ~Hugs~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I love the colorful sass and imagination in this lady!!! as always you are a pleasure to read... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ok, lolol, I thought I downplayed how gorgeous he looked on that bike, well...I tried to downplay how gorgeous he looked on that bike....guess I was only fooling myself..........rofg glad you enjoyed  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
OK, on the bike in the muscle shirt. I can see that. Good one.Nan |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~*Smiling BIG*~ I absolutely adore this piece! ~*Smiling more and heading back to read again*~ ~Sheri |
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