Open Poetry #21 |
Heard |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Heard of all the people that hear you I listen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Helen...and so much said in less than ten words. ~Hugs~ |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
shallow in words but deep in thought. i like A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...so glad am I, as the things I say are meant for You. jwesley Neat piece... j. |
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GRMcLean Junior Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 10 |
This poem says to me, that to really "hear" someone, you have to say very little, which is what your poem does. That's nice, and shows the point well in it's breviety. Good job. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If the E.F. Hutton of PiP speaks, I guess that means Slick listens....??? Like this message.. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I know Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
yes there is beauty in silence and in being heard..neat piece |
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turtlefreak1979 Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 20~turtle lane~ |
i love it, so few words but such deep meaning! [This message has been edited by turtlefreak1979 (07-11-2002 03:22 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
no greater compliment can you give any of us than the subject of this poem - real listening means someone cares - thanks Paul |
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