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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-03 01:04 PM





be still


and let
me hear
your thoughts
the echo
of heart beat
substance of
a soul

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-03 01:56 PM


Your words are strumming the strings of my soul!!

Kris

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2 posted 2002-07-03 02:11 PM


I loved this piece, and sure like your new picture too, very nice.

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family and my friends.

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2002-07-03 11:52 PM


Life is so busy sometimes that we need a moment sometimes to just sit and think..I like this one.
mycafe
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4 posted 2002-07-04 04:44 AM


So much is said in here.  Loved it!

~mycafe

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ethome
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5 posted 2002-07-04 04:47 AM


Nicely written.
The meaning is huge!
The title is perfect!

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