Open Poetry #21 |
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- Rescue Me - |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA ![]() |
Rescue Me I am the screaming pin drop inside the heart of that proverbial Snow White sleeping in wait 'neath glass dreams and moon beams choking on the apple core of failed expectations, poisioned by the fantasy that my white knight exists. I am restless, exhausted by the search, I am my own worst enemy - for, I believe. Pathetic how in between the redundant serenade and pity for the wounded minstrel, I trust in what he decrees me to be, and, I conform, become the cliche of the masses, thinking that I can turn a pauper into a prince. Here I am, in strut of pose, an imposter, insecure, though masked in allure; I'll wear the gown, the lips, the heels, it's almost midnight, claim me now before I turn into a pumpkin. I've sold my own spirit and broken my own promises, I'll settle for less and entertain in jest, so cut me out with all the paper dolls, paint my chest with silicone, tape me up and dye me blonde. But, what's forever for? if it dries up faster than a kiss when marriage and divorce is 50/50 success? Someone should tell Mother Goose this fairytale is a mess. Rescue me, force the happy ending, dissipate the tears and tell me the lies, I am your willing maiden, I'll change for you. Save me, love me, fill the need, ride me off into the sunset, I'll make a deal not to feel. I'll be your martyr and moan your praise, I'll even lick your burns and let the salt drip my eyes until I finally see. All I ask is that you rescue me from me. By Melissa P. Monette |
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Krishankins![]()
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
"here I am, in strut of pose, an imposter" I love that line. It sings with originality!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Belle19 Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19California |
Wow! "If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change the way you think about it" :-) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Melissa..interesting phrases here |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Haven't seen you do that in a while. I'm getting mad at myself because I realize I've grown to like it. ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wowzers Melybee, there is a huge difference between being lonely and being alone, and this poem sure shows the difference! I bet so many could indentify with this, and thank goodness I am only alone. Nothing means more to me than faith, |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"...Here I am, in strut of pose, an imposter, insecure, though masked in allure; I'll wear the gown, the lips, the heels, it's almost midnight, claim me now before I turn into a pumpkin...." :::LeFT SpEEchLeSS::: Stunning, Haunting, Beautiful... ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, girl you have such a head like me. Why is it like this,I would love to find the answer. Fairy tales can come true..isn't that in one of the disney songs. Liars..all. But you sure write of it profoundly. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Save me, love me, fill the need, ride me off into the sunset, I'll make a deal not to feel. I'll be your martyr and moan your praise, I'll even lick your burns and let the salt drip my eyes until I finally see. All I ask is that you rescue me from me. ![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Melissa, this reminded me so much of Pink's "Don't Let Me Get Me", sweet friend, I understand how you feel and I too hope you find all your heart desires soon for you are so deserving of it. Stay true to yourself and your dreams, sweet friend, they will come true soon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
if only we could look into our own hearts with the same kind of honesty that you do my friend. . . perhaps. . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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