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Open Poetry #21

Will You Tell Me

jge84
Junior Member

since 2002-06-27

Posts 10
IL USA

0 posted 2002-07-02 09:55 PM

Will you tell me you love me,
And if you mean it or not.
I need to know,
Or my heart will rot.

Tell me now,
And tell me true,
So I can say
I'm here for you.

We can't just be friends,
Let that be known.
Because I despise
Being alone.

- Dedicated to M. B.

If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe.

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

1 posted 2002-07-03 01:40 AM

This was SUCH an awesome poem. You are a spectacular writer! Go to Dark Passions 3 and post this stuff!!!!!!!! Cause your writing Dark Poems boy! Lol. Luv ya.
LP1

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-07-07 10:19 PM

I liked this very much! I'm giving it a bump so others can enjoy it.

Krishankins

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2002-07-08 03:10 AM

Excellent!!!!!  You laid the cards right on the table, and asked for the same honesty in return. Great insight here.....

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!



[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-08-2002 03:10 AM).]

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