Open Poetry #21 |
Rainbows |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Peace floats on long curves of time To needs beyond the drought Seeing heaven touch and calm The life of rainy clouds A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
K darling heart you are a weaver of stars incandescent dreams WOW this is utterly utterly delightful you’ve written an absolutely precious think of poetic ink here. The flow of thought in this is wonderful and the rhythm absolutely divine. I love the image this brings so softly tenderly soft whispered dreams. Write more much much more this is incredible writing. I’m awed by your writing simply awed Love and warm stuff As always Slushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
*sigh* this is so lovely kris. You truly are the master of these short poems! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
bent past rain you color the curves with emotions |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Oh, we so need rain here, please, please, let the clouds storm a little longer... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice Kris! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely. Let it rain. Sandra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is just lovely Kris... I'd KILL for some on those rain clouds this way, always been my favorite time of year... and? lucky clouds I'd say!!! hugs you!! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, I just love he gorgeous small visions you captivate in your fabulous words! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful...can you do a rain dance for me? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kris Yet another stunning piece of writing from you. The imagery was fabulous and I applaud anyone who can say so much with so few words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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