Open Poetry #21 |
Why Did I Love You? |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
(I am writing this about this guy Greg that I dated for a short period of time who was just playin' me.) Why did I love you? Why do my tears fall like rain? You caused me pain On my life you are a strain You are nothing but a stain Why did I Love you? You used me abused me lied to me Why the hell did I love you? Why did I love you? You used girls before me You mistreated them and lied to them like you lied to me Why did I love you? Why would you use a life long friend? That is just wrong I said that was that This game is through Now I don't love you anymore. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Like they say...."It's not nice to fool Mother Nature" or a woman.... Nice strong write of feelings... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Dead on and to the point. Very pragmatic write. ThisDiamond |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes we trust to easily and we love too easily...but hopefully we learn *s M |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
*hugs* Aw sweetie, we all get played at one time or another, and its one of the most painful feelings. Once you find someone who treats you right and respects you though, you find every mistake you've ever made was worth it to be where you are now. You learn from every experience, you know? Great job expressing this into a poem, lots of emotion. Nicely written =) Tai |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Its sometimes the easiest asked questions that are hard to find answers to. A lot of ache and yet strength in knowledge in these words. Once we learn what we are looking for, we tend to learn more at what we are looking. Why? Because that is what we do to learn, to grow, to survive. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes some just want to play...if we could figure out ahead of time who wanted to play and who was serious before we fell in love it would save us lots of pain...sometimes all the signs are there and we choose to ignore them...James |
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