Open Poetry #21 |
Powerful Smile |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Powerful Smile By Larry Chadwick He did it with a smile that I misunderstood, I gave to him my trust because I thought I could. But I misread the smile upon his powerful face, And mistakenly I found my confidence was misplaced. My error nearly proved to me to be fatal, I would have reclaimed my choice had I been able. So when a lion shows his teeth to you, Don’t assume that he is smiling too. July 1, 2002 Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
No doubt, the cat was glad to see you. Probably thought you were lunch. Fun write, Larry. Note to self--Not everyone who smiles has my best interests at heart. Shenachie |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You have to watch out for those smiles. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn, I understand this much too well! Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
no truer words have ever been spoken. your words come to life and take the face of reality. thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
The last two lines are a variation on an African saying I heard today on the radio. Shenachie, Boy ain't that the truth! And thanks. Sue, Yup...ya' do! Thanks. Duncan, That explains a lot! And thanks. Keith, Thanks. And nice to see another Arizonan in here. Glad to meet you and I'll look for your work. Welcome, I hope you like it here as much as me. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Looks can be deceiving, it's what lies in the heart that matters most... Nice writing Larry~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Thanks for this great reminder, Larry. Sometimes we have to learn not to trust too soon. Nice write and fun read ! marie@mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I suppose this would pertain to a shark also...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Indeed it is. Thanks. Marie, Welcome to Passions. Hope you like it here. And thanks a bunch. James, Do sharks smile? Silly guy. Thanks. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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