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Lean On Me
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Lean On Me |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I take your strife with me to bed at night- I lay down with tears of sacrifice… I battle inner sanction ~I scream~ for your peace In all of damnation- I litigate need… I swallow your dreams of bad harmony- I consecrate heartache with blessed sanctity… I touch upon secrets inside your mind- I cleanse all the wounds you try to hide… I repair from within- this backwards disease, I give you bold shoulder you may lean on me… for someone *very* close to my heart... ~you know  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
your a strong woman it seems from this poem... powerful write yuh |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
wow.......... Do I dare to look at whats really there, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes? Just the offer of a shoulder is enough to make you stand straighter. You are a beautiful friend for the pure spirit of compassion that shines through this--gracious, touching and YES, sweet!  (if I keep kissing all night, I am gonna have swollen lips! ---hmmm...nothing wrong with THAT! heh heh) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful! What a caring soul you have. ~Hugs~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
An emotionally strong and dependable lady I could infer from here! Your friend is so fortunate to have your shoulder to lean on. What a powerful poem you've just written.  ~marie@mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
You hit this one out of the park girl!! I love it!!!! Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful offering! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Walter-Now you know me sweets... Match-ty for that!! serenity- I love you too me sis of heart...big hugs across the miles!!! Enchantress- ty sweetie...I get in these "moods" you know??? marie- I consider myself just as lucky to be graced with these friends!! ty Kris- thank you sweets...the same applies to you, ya know??? always... Eagle One- oh, I try... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (07-03-2002 07:39 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a wonderful promise. . . you know that I love this. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Made me wanna cry dear lady .... And I've been told that takes a lot! You're awesome! ~Sheri |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful thoughts of unfailing devotion despite the haunts of human imperfection. Very very nicely done!! |
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