Open Poetry #21 |
A Poet's Music (To all PIP composers :D) |
mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
A Poet's Music You sing a poem of pulses’ rhythm I feel your muse strumming sensations Tune me in with your keys of joy, sadness even For in a trance I would dance to the beats your words drum keep it going passion’s burning A new music's born, a fine poet’s electrifying heart song~ Keep counting your blessings [This message has been edited by mycafe (07-01-2002 09:37 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
And your heart song flows beautifully Marie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And a beautiful song you sing Marie! Well done! ~Hugs~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
we all make such beautiful music together!!! Love it |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A new music's born, a fine poet’s electrifying heart song~ Very cool! Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marie This was lovely and I'm sure many can relate. Thank you so much for all the lovely comments you afford my writing, they are so much appreciated. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Marie this is a wonderful tribute to PiP’s poets beautifully presented and wonderfully well written I like it a lot well done Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Where songs are born Words will enfold Your's did Beautifully Thanks Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent! I really enjoyed your 'song'! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always write such beautiful harmonic songs to us all as everyone here does to me! (kiss on cheek) Thank you so much for this angelic melody, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Dear devina, Enchantress, RosePetal, Duncan, Sue, Krissy, Titia, Poet deVine & Noah~ Thank you all for your kind words, you sing poems of great beauty...please keep me dancing with your music. *hugs* marie@mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, i don't know...i always sing out of tune i dig your poetry, by the way..you always have something special to share... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds to me like you are the song itself. Wonderful words to share to the fabulous poets in this home away from home. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so so very gorgeous, Marie... Poems are songs which are spoken... ~ singing hugs Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
mycafe A very nice write, enjoyed. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah, yes........I can tell a fellow musician by their words!! And this one is beautifully put, I might add........much enjoyed!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-08-2002 03:36 AM).] |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Dear lovely frens, thank you for your kind words. faterider, really? Thanks for visiting my limited collection. Still trying to compose more heart songs... ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marie, this is a beautiful melody for us to listen to. Thank you for a lovely gift. Hugs. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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